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Your Marketing Isn’t Working Because You’re Saying Too Much


Why Saying Too Much in Your Marketing Is Costing You Clients

If you own a med spa, your work is anything but simple.

You’re balancing clinical excellence with aesthetics and staying on top of constantly evolving technology. That means tailoring treatments to individual clients while maintaining the highest standards of safety and care -none of what you do is generic or surface-level, and it often requires educating patients so they can make the best decisions.

While you're good at what you do - services rooted in science and results - when it comes to your marketing, you may have noticed something frustrating: the more you try to differentiate yourself - to explain what makes your med spa special - the harder it feels to get people to actually book.

This isn’t because your services aren’t compelling. It’s because your marketing messaging is asking too much of the person on the other side of the message.

The Real Reason Your Marketing Messaging Isn’t Working

Most med spa owners assume that if potential clients truly understood everything they offered—the technology, the training, the philosophy—they would immediately see the value. So they explain more, add depth, layer in nuance. They try to say it all at once. The problem is that what feels like clarity to a practitioner often feels like marketing rhetoric to someone encountering your brand for the first time.

When a prospective client has to pause and mentally untangle what you do, who you’re for, and whether you’re right for them, they rarely push through that friction, causing them to hesitate, second-guess what they're reading, and worse, keep scrolling .

There’s a simple principle at work here: when people feel confused, they don’t take action. You lose the opportunity to talk with them because they quietly (mentally) opt out and look elsewhere for something that requires less of a cognitive load to consume.

Why Confusing Marketing Creates Cognitive Load (and Costs You Clients)

At the center of this issue is something called “cognitive load” - the amount of mental energy it takes for someone to understand what they’re seeing or hearing. Every word you put into your marketing adds to that load. The more concepts, explanations, and qualifiers you introduce, the harder the brain has to work just to make sense of your message.

For a med spa owner, this can be especially tricky. Your work is nuanced and personalized. It’s rooted in science, and it's often technical in nature. While you care deeply about educating your clients, the human brain is wired for efficiency. For them, when understanding something starts to feel like work, they'll start to look for an easier alternative.

This is why marketing that tries to say everything often ends up saying nothing at all. The message becomes too heavy to carry, and the client sets it down.

If You’ve Ever Struggled to Explain What You Do, You’re Not Alone

If this feels familiar, it’s worth saying plainly: this isn’t a failure on your part. And when you’re not starting from scratch, you’ve already thought this through time and again.

In fact, struggling with how to explain what you do is often a sign that you’re deeply experienced and highly invested in your craft. Unlike less experienced providers, you understand the stakes of failing to explain properly  and what's at risk for patients - not to mention what's possible. That means you know what separates good outcomes from great ones.

The challenge is that your clients don’t need all of the information upfront in order to make a decision. Not because it isn’t important, but because they don’t yet know where to place it. What they need first is marketing clarity—a simple, reassuring sense that you understand their problem and can help solve it. This is where effective messaging shifts from explanation to guidance.

What a Clear Marketing Message Actually Sounds Like

A clear marketing message doesn’t attempt to capture the full depth of your expertise in a single moment. Instead, it gives people an easy place to step in.

Clear messaging feels light, not because it lacks substance, but because it’s focused. Focused clearly on one problem that demonstrates your understanding of what they are going through. It invites curiosity rather than demanding comprehension. In contrast, high cognitive load messaging tries to earn trust by saying more. Low cognitive load messaging earns trust by making people feel understood quickly.

This distinction matters. When your message is easy to grasp, people relax. And when people relax, they’re far more likely to take the next step.

The PEACE Framework: Five Soundbites That Make Messaging Stick

One of the most effective approaches to reducing cognitive load comes from the Soundbite Strategy taught by StoryBrand. It’s a framework designed to help businesses communicate clearly by anchoring their messaging around five simple ideas:

PEACE
Problem, Empathy, Answer, Change, and End Result.

Rather than trying to explain everything, this approach encourages you to create a small set of repeatable soundbites that guide people through a story—one where your client is the hero, and your med spa is the trusted guide.

This strategy isn’t about being clever or catchy. It’s about being clear and consistent. Over time, these soundbites become the language your audience associates with you, making your marketing messaging easier to remember and easier to trust.

There is an entire course dedicated to this Soundbite Strategy through StoryBrand, and it’s a powerful resource for understanding the philosophy behind this approach. What many med spa owners find challenging, though, is translating that philosophy into language that works for their specific services, audience, and market.

Why Messaging That Converts Focuses on Change and End Results

The most effective messaging that converts doesn’t linger on process or features. It focuses on transformation. Your clients aren’t booking treatments because they want a modality. They’re booking because they want to feel more confident, more at ease in their appearance, or more like themselves again.

When your marketing messaging highlights the change they’re seeking—and the end result they’re hoping for—it gives them a reason to move forward. It helps them imagine life on the other side of the decision. That vision is what turns interest into action.

How to Simplify Your Marketing Message Without Losing the Depth of Your Work

One of the most common concerns we hear from med spa owners is the fear that simplifying their message will make them sound generic. In reality, the opposite is true.

When you simplify your marketing message, you aren’t removing depth—you’re sequencing it. You’re allowing clients to enter the conversation at a pace their brains can handle, and inviting them to learn more once trust is established.

This is exactly where strategy matters. Knowing what to say first, what to repeat, and what to save for later is the difference between marketing that overwhelms and marketing that converts.

It’s also what we’ll be walking through in detail in our upcoming webinar.

If you’ve ever felt like your marketing should be working better than it is—given how strong your services truly are—this conversation will meet you right where you are. Clarity doesn’t come from saying more. It comes from saying the right things, in the right order.

And that’s a skill worth learning.

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Jennifer Orechwa

I love helping CEOs and business owners find innovative solutions to their unique growth challenges. Today, as a fractional CMO and agency owner, I offer clients over 20 years of marketing experience, from strategy to implementation to ROI and iteration to the next milestone.